英语短文改错
当然,我可以帮你。下面是一篇约50字的短文,你可以根据需要调整内容。
【原文】
In the summer, I like to go for a walk in the park every day. It's a good way to keep fit and enjoy the beautiful nature. Sometimes, I meet my friends there, we chat and play games together. However, I notice that many people throw rubbish on the ground, which is very disappointing.
【改错后】
In the summer, I like to go for a walk in the park every day. It's a good way to keep fit and enjoy the beauty of nature. Sometimes, I meet my friends there; we chat and play games together. However, I notice that many people throw rubbish on the ground, which is very disappointing.
(注:原文中"enjoy the beautiful nature." 改为 "enjoy the beauty of nature." 更符合英语表达习惯;"we chat and play games together." 后面的句号改为分号更合适;最后一句没有错误,保持不变。)
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